My Next Novel steams into Port

I’m happy to report that I’m thoroughly enjoying work on my sixth novel. This week felt like a watershed; at 25,000 words in, key characters are starting to feel like old friends, and I’m eighty percent sure of the plot (I just wrote the ending, as I usually do at this stage).

My readers will know that I branched into short stories a couple of years ago. With a growing list of competition credits and enough stories to feed the comp mill for a year or two, I felt it was time to tackle another novel. In addition, the No Boundaries writing group I founded last year (under the auspices of the wonderful WritingNSW) gave me the feedback forum I needed. Indeed my five published novels were all written with the support of Sarah Bourne’s Write On! group at WritingNSW’s gracious headquarters in Callan Park, Sydney over about nine years.

The new novel began as a technical exercise. I’m used to the current model of telling a story through a limited number – perhaps four of five – points of view, using close third person and sometimes first person narration. If you’ve been to a writing group you might be used to the POV Nazi: “I think you might have a bit of head hopping there”. OK, I’ve been perpetrator and accuser myself.

But I’ve often wondered why so few novels use omniscient point of view these days, and I was determined to have a go at it. As it happened, I’d been thinking a lot about Katherine Anne Porter’s Ship of Fools, which uses omniscient narrator and a large cast of characters. It seemed almost indecent to inhabit so many heads! My urge was strengthened by memories of the 1965 movie of Ship of Fools, which I swooned over as a lovesick teenager. I read the book again, watched the movie again, and the creative juices flowed.

Apart from a voyage from Athens to Alexandria in 1973 in a clapped-out steamer, my nautical experience has been modern cruise ships. These cocktail palaces present endless plot opportunities: Jam several thousand strangers on a floating hotel, give them an unlimited drinks package, wait for inhibitions to fly away. It’s a fiction writer’s paradise! Check out my cruise ship short story Your Own Luck in my anthology.

So my novel is a contemporary Australian thriller, laced with dark humour. The core impetus is the setting: A small luxury cruise ship en route from Dubai to Sydney loses contact with the outside world: What are the stakes for the passengers untethered from their electronic lives? Why has the ship gone dark? And how does order break down among ostensibly civilised people? The answers to these questions will become clear maybe a year from now! Along the way, some tall poppies will be cut down, some good guys will turn out to be bad guys, and I’ll be pondering whether revenge is all it’s cracked up to be.

Yours nautically,

Stuart

Author deep in plot development at sea.

Review of Rebirth: A Love Story from the Depths of War by Antoun Issa

“Are your family Lebanese?” I asked the young glazier working in my house. “Yeah, I’m second generation,” he said.

I told him I’d been in Beirut in 1973.

“Ah, the good old days,” he replied.

In the Epilogue to Rebirth, Lebanese-Australian journalist Antoun Issa notes the yearning among many Lebanese for a Lebanon ‘untainted by war’. My glazier had clearly inherited this yearning from his parents.

Rebirth tells the story of a poor Beirut family torn apart by the 1975 civil war, who eventually migrate to the inhospitable northern suburbs of Melbourne. The story is told through Antoun Issa’s mother’s eyes in a remarkable feat of fictionalised biography. Laila’s family live in dire poverty in Jisr El Bacha, a Maronite Christian suburb squeezed up against two Palestinian refugee camps. Her father Fares struggles to provide for the family, but Laila has to leave school at fourteen to work as a tailor. As the civil war erupts, Fares insists that the family remain isolated from politics, but the vicious conflict between the PLO and the Phalangists shatters their home, their family and their friendships.

In the late seventies I taught many adult migrant Lebanese in Sydney who’d fled the aftermath of the civil war. With Egypt as my own point of reference for the Arab World, I was intrigued by these people with their curious Arabic dialects, French given names, and fiercely protective attitude to their culture. I met students from Christian villages whose families had spoken Aramaic a few generations past, others from Sunni towns. I met refined intellectuals, poets, preachers, schoolteachers. Cognisant of their confessional government system and clan loyalties, I trod carefully. They formed a cultural kaleidoscope whose colours I could barely distinguish. The students never spoke of the war. I never asked.

Antoun Issa’s Rebirth lays bare the reality of the shootings, the betrayals, the checkpoints, the revenge, the hunger. The emotional impact is supercharged through the family’s fierce instinct to maintain their values despite the vileness of their circumstances. Food – or the lack of it – is a central concern as Laila’s mother makes scraps into meals during the long siege as shells and bullets fly around their house. In the latter part of the book Laila is astonished by the huge quantities of food served in Australia; when in Jisr El Bacha a few pine nuts were a treat, here they were piled on in pointless abundance.

Rebirth gave me a clue about the lives of those students in the faraway seventies, and I thank Antoun Issa for filling this gap.

The author does a skilful job of creating a voice for Laila – rich in noble sentiment, heavily larded with metaphor, and drenched in pathos. I found this approach entirely appropriate for a story that conveys the tragic history of a family, a culture and a country. There is the deft hand of the journalist in this work, especially in Antoun Issa’s handling of politics in a text driven by voices that claim to be apolitical; when necessary, he discreetly stands back from the action to seamlessly explain a point about who is slaughtering who and why.

I was interested to observe how he peppers the dialogue with Arabic to convey the foreignness of the setting and characters (a special interest of mine). In much the same fashion as Michael Mohammed Ahmad’s The Tribe, we see find untranslated easy to guess words like finjen ‘cup’; others like tfaddal, untranslated but clearly a welcoming utterance from the context; and expressions with translations such as Leik ya hala – welcome! Overall the foreignisms do their job of exoticising the setting without clogging the text.

Alf shukr (a thousand thank yous) to Antoun Issa for this deeply affecting and intellectually satisfying novel.